呵呵！意外咯！妈咪的眼镜差一点掉到地上了。宝贝第一次考的华文作文竟然拿到 28/30。还是因为写错字而被扣分的。看来妈咪真的要对他'刮目相看'咯。特地type下来他的" 第一次"，好让日后他可以回味一下。哈哈！
学校运动会
第一段 ：举行/一年一度/运动会
第二段 ： 当天/操场/四周/挂满/旗子/家长/参观/场面/热闹
第三段 ：运动员/整齐/队伍/进入/唱/国歌/校歌/比赛/开始
第四段 : 项目/跳高/赛跑/打气/表现/冠军/颁发奖品/胜利/开心/手舞足蹈/过后/愉快/回家
上个星期六,我的学校举行一年一度的运动会。
比赛当天，绿油油的操场四周挂满五颜六色的旗子。运动员的家长也来参观运动会。场面热闹极了！
运动员排成整齐的队伍，进入操场，唱国歌、州歌以及校歌。唱完了之后，比赛在八点半开始了。
运动会有各种各样的项目，例如：跳高、赛跑、跳远等等。啦啦队为自己的组打气加油，表现很精彩。运动员们都为他们的组而尽力。一场龙争虎斗之后，比赛在十二点结束了。成绩公布了，青组拿到冠军。在颁发奖品时，青组因为胜利而开心地手舞足蹈。过后，我们带着愉快的心情回家。
9 条评论:
不愧是中文系的媽咪教出來的..
yy。。。你这样说师奶觉得很不好意思啦。哪里敢当？！ ：P
呵呵！我家老爷看了少爷的考试作文 满脸高兴地说 ： I am so proud of my son. 老怀大慰咯。。。还有这一句 “like mother like son .haha!
yes, you should be proud of your Samson, he is good. the writing lead me to think about the good old days and only the winning team is blue house :)
PS...thanks. ya, I am always proud of my one and only son. haha! though sometime he really makes my hair stand :P....yaya, when talking about sports day, I will always remember ours....those good old days。。。 蓝队加油！哈哈！！！
he is real good, well organised essay, lovely, do you know that he really inherit all the merits from you. proud of him!
ww...thanks again :) actually hoh...the structure of the essay is kind of set by the teacher already -- 4 paragraphs + some key words were given ...but what 'surprised' mommy was Samson knew and used some 形容词 + 成语 appropriately， like 绿油油 /五颜六色 / 精彩/ 结束 /龙争虎斗。 hahaha...really out of my expectation :)
面子书留言：
Sabrina Woong CW
@bro...yr naughty nephew saw me happily typing his essay last night. he said "mom, u want to put this on yr blog?" I said "yes. something special ma“...Then he had the cheek to say "I am sure KFC will comment ~ 写得很好哦！” immediately i show him a 'vomit' expression. hahaha :)
Wednesday at 18:14
Allan 志成 Woong
飽死荷蘭豆！哈哈哈 show him what I wrote on your blog la! now going out for Orange Wednesday...yeah!!! The Last Airbender in 3D lorrr! :)
Wednesday at 18:37
Lee Wai Wan Samson has inherited all the talents from mummy. I can still remember you wrote the best stories, essays and articles in P4G and P5G.
Wednesday at 23:12
Sabrina Woong CW @WW ~ Samson's mommy has no talent, she only knows to nag + scold + angry with her son. haha :P....wah, those old days in P4G + P5G, u really remembered ya...yr compliments made me feel like 飘飘然 ：）
Wednesday at 23:32
Hahaah..... ya lar! I was also impressed by his elaborating words! Not bad, not bad.
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